Happy Valentine's Day! What better way to celebrate than with a steamy blog hop? This kissing scene hop is the brainchild of Hope Roberson and Cassie Mae. Thanks for thinking up such an perfect topic for today.
My scene is from my newest WIP, a paranormal romance featuring vampires. Never thought I'd write a vampire story, but now I never say never, lol. The hero is a embittered (and crude) vampire prince who hates humans until the day he meets the heroine, a human liaison to the vampire nation. She hates and fears vampires, having lost her ex to his own obsession with becoming a vampire. This is their first kiss. I probably shouldn't have picked a first draft, but most of my stuff is too graphic for public consumption :) Thanks for coming by!
As they neared Ptolomy’s mansion, Val clutched her
satchel with an iron grip, her knuckles white. Her lips trembled, and he could smell her fear again. She pulled her thick black peacoat tighter, readjusting
the tie at her waist. He felt her chill, it was written so plainly in her body
language. Her vulnerability broke open a pocket of warmth in him. Without
thinking, he reached for her, pulling her close against his side.
She sat
stiffly at first. He stroked his hand up and down her arm, firm
and soothing. Her body softened, the tension easing, and she relaxed her head
against his shoulder. Unable to deny himself, he nuzzled her pale wheat curls,
that heady lilac scent too much to resist. She was softer than mink. He turned
his head to brush his cheek against the luxurious sensation.
She lifted her head to meet his gaze. Those eyes were
brilliant pools of Caribbean, her pupils dilated with arousal. Hell yeah, she
wanted him. But they were also wide with surprise. He’d only wanted to comfort
her, but now his head dipped toward hers. When she licked her lips in response,
it was all he could do to be gentle when he wanted to ravage her mouth. He
touched his lips to hers, a tender sweep across and back again. An electric
charge zipped all the way to the bottom of his feet, drawing his body tight.
Just as he would have settled more firmly against her sweet mouth, the door
swung open.
She jerked away from him, her fingers at her lips. Her
eyes clouded with confusion and regret. F**k. He shot his driver a withering
look, and the man cringed. He shook his head sharply before the man could
stumble over an apology. Douchebag had also arrived at the side of the car, and
Kade didn’t want the bastard to know anything was amiss. Holding a hand out for
Val, he guided her out of the car and to the heavy doors of the mansion where
Ptolomy no doubt waited impatiently for them.
Optional reading only, Val's POV (Graham is "Douchebag" to Kade):
Optional reading only, Val's POV (Graham is "Douchebag" to Kade):
Her lips tingled where Kade’s had been, and Val’s mind
was a jumble. Why had she let that kiss happen? She’d been at the head of a
panic attack. Maybe that had weakened her enough to succumb to Kade. Maybe she
would have taken the comfort from anyone. That didn’t really fly because had it
been Graham, she would have turned a cheek. She knew because Graham had made
the attempt before.
Even more surprising than her easy participation was
Kade himself. He’d caressed her hair with his face, like a thoughtful lover,
and it had put her body and mind into a sweet, blissful fog. He’d been so soft,
so careful, his lips whispering along hers. She would have taken him for the
caveman-kiss type complete with bruising force and an invasion of tongue and
teeth.
“Ready for this?” Kade asked. With a start, she
realized they were in the foyer, and she was still holding his hand. She
dropped it like it was on fire. Apparently it had been on fire because her hand
was hot from the contact.
Love this - and I'm fond of vampires :-)
ReplyDeleteI also love the title of your blog. You may find kinship with Jagger Valentine at www.jaggervalentine.com. She's as jaded as it gets!
I'm #52 on today's hop.
That was written with incredible description! Loved it! :D
ReplyDeleteWow, you write beautifully! I loved the duel perspectives and the blunt ending to the kiss, great voice! Happy Valentine's day :)
ReplyDeleteBummer they got interrupted, I was enjoying it soooo much:)
ReplyDeleteI like vampires ;)
ReplyDeleteAnd I like both scenes. Oh, how I like when they want each other, but morals say they can't be together ;)
I can't say I ever plan to write vampires ever, but you never know. Just followed you. Loved your entry, too! :)
ReplyDeleteI am not generally fond of vampire's in love with humans. generally but it looks like you have a very spiciness and different world that you are writing in. this scene makes me want to know more about that world.
ReplyDeleteOoh! Very nice. I like it even though I'm not a huge vampire fan, especially vampires with humans. But this works. Great world building even in such a short scene.
ReplyDeleteNicely done! I love the name of your blog, by the way. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is great! I'm all about the vampire thing. Love it!
ReplyDeleteThis has a definite grown-up quality that I like in a vampire novel. Wow, it's hot, too. Your writing is fast-paced and spunky. Love it!
ReplyDeleteI think you hooked me with "too graphic for public consumptiion" as I've had that same problem.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I enjoyed both versions (except I would have liked for Kade's name to be mentioned early in the writing).
These two sound perfectly conflicted - which makes for more intense lovers :)
.......dhole
Your descriptions were spot on. I was feeling it :) Love the name of your blog BTW, I'm your newest follower :)
ReplyDeleteYou have a gift for romantic scenes. I love this line, " Her vulnerability broke open a pocket of warmth in him."
ReplyDelete"She would have taken him for the caveman-kiss type..." <-- LOL! That line made me smile :-)
ReplyDeletePS - I'm in the paranormal romance group with you for the campaign.
Love these two scenes, nicely done! I'm in your para group btw. Thanks for the follow, I'm happy to be a follower on your blog too!
ReplyDelete"A tender sweep" . . . I LOVE it! This is a FIRST DRAFT?! Holy excellent.
ReplyDeleteI love that we get to see both POV's. Super cute!
ReplyDeletePretty hot - she ought to be scared!
ReplyDeleteI so love this. It is awesome and I love getting to hear both POV's. I also love your blog-the title, design, everything. Thanks for visiting my blog. I am a new follower of yours.
ReplyDeleteI gave you a Shout-Out on my blog today, just so you know. :)
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